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Flowing time
can’t stop time

Flowing time
pass too fast

Flowing time
can’t come back

Flowing time
caught me here

Flowing time
won’t stop this time.
short poem
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:iconrebelfemme:
rebelfemme Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2005
Yes, short and sweet, as others have so aptly noticed. Good call on first line repetition to emphasise inner meaning.
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xetha Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
thanko so much :hug:
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M-O-D Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2005
Good job of difening time, I really like it :hug:
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:iconxetha:
xetha Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
thanks, sweeite :glomp:
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goodgirlie Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Short n sweet.......n so true!
Nice poem!=)
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xetha Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
thanko...
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goodgirlie Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
anytime,gal!=)
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thy-ilia Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2005
i found another meaning.=]
times flowing. but so should you =] life is a continouse epic. not a sequance of events .
you should cherish the former
and view youre broblems like the later =]
bye bye now


ps. i wish i had an audiance as big as youre =D but hey. i got 24 view on one poems. and im thrilled.. thats 24 ppl i elightened. or made them think =]
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xetha Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
thanks alot... I will come and look at you poems, so you will get one more pageviwer.. :D
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thy-ilia Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2005
comment too .. it doesnt hurt =D
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