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Flowing

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Flowing time
can’t stop time

Flowing time
pass too fast

Flowing time
can’t come back

Flowing time
caught me here

Flowing time
won’t stop this time.
short poem
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rebelfemme's avatar
Yes, short and sweet, as others have so aptly noticed. Good call on first line repetition to emphasise inner meaning.